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Sunday, October 18, 2015

patio11 comments on "Retro diner in Detroit neighborhood wards off crime"

By patio11

Try phrasing the thesis of this article in a sentence beginning with the words “People in this neighborhood choose to…” It is absolutely, 100% clear what that thesis is and how that sentence must end. The decisionmaking model it implies is insane, unlikely, and also a thing that nobody who writes at any US newspaper (and certainly not the DFP) can actually get away with writing in any circumstance whatsoever, owing to the neighborhood demographics.



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